Leopold+Sedar+Senghor

﻿Coral I want to say her name Her name just rolls off your tounge like a ball rolling down a slide Makes you feel like your in the deep blue depths of the sea And every time you say it your mind, it turns to a watery fishy rock pool In her free time she wonders down to beach to find tilly the turtle Because here in Rarotonga the beach is always 1 minute away Try to pull her ﻿﻿away from the beach and she will block out any confersations anyone trys to start Coral, Coral will you ever change, there is more in the world then the deep blue sea.

HI Tabs I like the start of this poem very much, but I'm not sure about 'mess'. Mr du. I changed it.Is it any better?